After reading both of my group members' descriptions and about me statements, I'm feeling like I might need to sit down and think about possibly changing some parts of mine. One of my group members in particular really impressed me with both his description and his about me statement. It was very creative, and especially in his about me statement, his personality really shined.
Although I feel that my description is pretty strong, I do think I could tweak it a bit to make it less vague. One of my group members suggested I make the reference to history stronger, but that's actually one of the parts I like most about my description: it includes both of my majors and relates them to what I'm talking about in my blog.
My about me statement, however, definitely needs some work. The same group member pointed out that the first half is a little weak, and I can see the truth in that. I'd like to change it a little by including more unconventional or quirky facts about me, as suggested, in order to include more of my personality and make it more creative and appealing. I think the second half I will probably leave as is, however.
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